Luwanic's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[smol comic]

in the last panel, for the fist kitting the first human, you should use a colour to show a strike, I think Yellow could work and not the same colour for the text.

RML-magic responds:

That would give more variety :0
I'll keep it in mind next time!

[school has started, and i'm gonna be in control]

It could work if you make the background look like a blue wall with small graffiti on it; the white writing on the wall can still stand out.

ultrapainkiller responds:

thanks for the advice! i made it traditionally and added the text later in digital, which makes it look out of place, but you definitely got the point

[Pillar Heights]

I think you could improve the piece with adding a design to what I think to be pink water.

lokimiah1 responds:

Noted. Pink stuff is clouds, as it is meant to connect to the image posted after it, in a sense. Hence why the sky is pink in the crossroads picture - continuity.

There's much more context, but I have many more pictures to draw, and bits to write to go with the pictures, and music to write to go with the bits that go with the pictures. It's a growing organism.

[smoooke]

I think it would have been better if the character smoked and then waited for some time to smoke again. Like she is taking a break more realistically.

[Hunkledorf Expression Sheet]

You could add the yellow to the inner circle of the cape clip.

[Brutus Free]

The amour looks fantastic.

[Desert commando]

looks similar to the gorrilaz art style.

HupPupHoooo responds:

Yeah, i wanted to emulate it somewhat

[Tengu]

That is great.

[Brofist]

I feel it can be better with some shading at parts

Triibot responds:

That's a fair review of it. Honestly I was questioning adding shading due to it being a simplistic piece, but it may have popped it out more if I did. Thanks very much for the critique.

[emmy the nandroid]

you could add shading to the piece. That is my opinion of course.

Try to use the sketching in the piece for demonstrating something like the inner anatomy of the robot maid.

UpgradeTurtle responds:

i know i should learn to do shading im just too lazy

the reason i leave the sketch lines visible is because i like the messy look of it i think it adds character