Luwanic's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[vodyanoy]

With the more scribbly style to it, It feels like a sketch before a final piece.

[couple]

I take that they are not a happy one.

[Stupid idiots]

They look similar to Ace and Noodle.

Slumbrsloth responds:

I see it! The expressions lol

[On Patrol]

Good to see the textures most of the image contents. I think the yellows in the light itself should be sharp spike which would pierce what the light touches.

[Rebel Whitebird]

I really do love the idea of connecting birds with music, rest of the piece looks good.

jouste responds:

hey thanks a bunch! yeah i think it's a pretty natural pairing.

*highflaps

[Cloud in a dream]

I think you could have items such as what I can describe it as a fat yellow glove to make it look like a real environment more. The rest is good.

[Cryptober 2020 - Lagarfljót Worm]

It would be better if you add environments to show he these creatures act. you can even make up the environment

Meglind responds:

Owww thank you for the comment! Maybe in a future i add some biomes, it's a little complicated for me but i can do.

[Sabre-Toothed Swan.]

wow, this is a tense redesign for untitled goose simulator.

[SO WHAT]

I think you should add colour to the first two panels that the head phones are on the table

correction: you should add colour to the first two panels as if the comic is set in one room; as each panel goes by, he is moving from right to left on the desk.

I have also given you half a star extra as I am treating the lack of colour as equivalent to half a star instead.

[Watercolor Month Day 6]

When you are hungry seagull but don't want to feel guilty about it.