Luwanic's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[My body is sexy?]

it can convey interesting idea about love, loving one despite there appearance; are you one not only to accept the body but also the face?

FuckuB2 responds:

maybe

[I Need more coffee !!!]

You could put the B2 where the cup is with steam coming out of the cup.

FuckuB2 responds:

Hmmmm ... good idea

[My new plant and other worlds]

for the corner part, you could move it up and make the shape round, placing the b2 somewhere else. I am having an issue with the corners filled up. the middle items is fine.

[advertising banner free drawings]

The issues I have have is the text. I understand the free part but what I am getting for the second line is "Draink".

[Balia and Ba]

Maybe incorporate tone with darker or opposing colours. Also add a background.

VanguardEzel62 responds:

Sadly a lot of these we made awhile back so we can’t add backgrounds anymore. We can try adding backgrounds for the newer drawings but I can’t promise anything but we will keep it in mind ^w^

[Armor Paint]

Love how the shading works on the face.

[Brenemesis]

I suggest you have some shading on your character's night wear.

frogd3mon responds:

thanks for the tip

[Vibing on the Beach]

Maybe you could add more white to the water.

BinaryRose responds:

Thanks for the suggestion, I'll try that next time

[Wendelin Ref]

Maybe you could add shading to your character.

Featherwaite responds:

While usually I would agree, I deliberately chose flat colours because I wanted it to be as clear and concise of a reference as possible. Thank you for the feedback, though!

[window]

I think you need to straighten your lines on the window frame. Maybe add faces?

LUNA404z responds:

I appreciate the feedback. I personally don't like definable people. it takes away from what I hope to convey through my content. it could be anyone in that picture. it could bring forth plenty of different emotions as well.