Luwanic's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[My body is sexy?]

it can convey interesting idea about love, loving one despite there appearance; are you one not only to accept the body but also the face?

FuckuB2 responds:

maybe

[I Need more coffee !!!]

You could put the B2 where the cup is with steam coming out of the cup.

FuckuB2 responds:

Hmmmm ... good idea

[Balia and Ba]

Maybe incorporate tone with darker or opposing colours. Also add a background.

VanguardEzel62 responds:

Sadly a lot of these we made awhile back so we can’t add backgrounds anymore. We can try adding backgrounds for the newer drawings but I can’t promise anything but we will keep it in mind ^w^

[Brenemesis]

I suggest you have some shading on your character's night wear.

frogd3mon responds:

thanks for the tip

[Vibing on the Beach]

Maybe you could add more white to the water.

BinaryRose responds:

Thanks for the suggestion, I'll try that next time

[Wendelin Ref]

Maybe you could add shading to your character.

Featherwaite responds:

While usually I would agree, I deliberately chose flat colours because I wanted it to be as clear and concise of a reference as possible. Thank you for the feedback, though!

[window]

I think you need to straighten your lines on the window frame. Maybe add faces?

LUNA404z responds:

I appreciate the feedback. I personally don't like definable people. it takes away from what I hope to convey through my content. it could be anyone in that picture. it could bring forth plenty of different emotions as well.

[MS drawing test]

This is really good. another point to prove you can make good art on ms paint. Maybe it doesn't matter what programme you use.

Ch0colateC0ff33 responds:

it doesn't matter what you use at all! As long as you wanna make something, use what you have!

[Negative Moon]

This really captures a mixed media impression for me. Perhaps you do make mixed media your thing?

lokimiah1 responds:

I just use the tools at my disposal to put my brain imprint on paper. I only had a hnadful of pens and a black sharpie, and so I drew this with those. Then, I found by accident that it looks *way* better in negative, and so I made that change - and here we are.